>WRITE A VERSE ABOUT FEELING LEFT BEHIND IN LIFE. 4 LINES
>TOPIC: COLD WEATHER
After involving myself in a thread I've had a good idea. Write song lyrics in 5 minutes
BRIEF:
Writing lyrics to popular songs is NOT about writing profound amazing lyrics. Simply put it is about writing ambiguous things that can be interpreted by all. Let's look at an example
I was scared of dentists and the dark
I was scared of pretty girls and starting conversations
Oh, all my friends are turning green
You're the magician's assistant in their dream
What is he writing about here?
>scared of stuff
>scared of stuff
>ambiguous comment
>not being recognised for your efforts
Well I'll be. Thats everyone in life who can think "Yeah. Thats me". With this in mind I want you to write a verse with the following subject;;
>WRITE A VERSE ABOUT FEELING LEFT BEHIND IN LIFE. 4 LINES
>TOPIC: COLD WEATHER
With this in mind we can learn to understand and develop lyric writing skills. A pro tip is to remember that pop lyric writinbg is not about being profound. Its not about leading the way. It is about making people relate to your lyrics. And just how do you get EVERYONE to relate to your lyrics? Millions of people who all live different lives. You make it generic and to the guidelines of what everyone thinks about
>Fear
>Excitement
>uncertainty
>boring
>aggressive
>bad breakup
>passive
All the things humans do on a day to day basis. And with this in mind. Lets make some lyrics. hard mode being it has to include the weather. and cold. lets go
Walking through the woods
Donning my dark hood
I'm gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
I like it. It makes me feel like I'm wearing a hoodie in the forest, and also like I'm good/chillen
Wheels spinning but the car ain't moving
The dirt grey snow allows no claim
Used to take it slow, used to be improving
Now I'm hurrying up to stay the same
Feel my hands, feel my hands, let me feel
phosphorous keeps chilling me people in my life keep peeling;
just feel my hands, steal my hands, see my hands
bring me to the green and bring me to the place I sought of
Same poster here (and also OP) im changing the last lyric to have a breakdown
after saying the place I sought of it'd go
>WHEN I WAS YOUNG
and then big sad music breakdown
>nobody posting
im sad lads.
Feeling no fucking heat
Do I really need to leave
The weather is so fucking mean
All I need is just the happy me
Winter gave way all at once
Melting quietly into an icy flood
I'll keep on searching for the sun
Cause good men looking's what made the good times good
out here
in winter
this untouched snow
reminds me of a girl i used to know
it's still falling
i'd like to go back,
but i've already
taken your time
and realized mine
as our fingers
entwined.
>kinda gay but i only had 5 minutes
It cold outside
Without you
Here beside me
Baby
I wish I'd die
But I couldn't cry
Without you by my side
Baby
The weather is cold (cold cold)
That bitch is old (old old)
I feeling left behind (hind hi-hind)
Cause my lyircs dont rhyme (dont rhyme, oh no)
My friends danced in the summer sun
And I used to join in on the fun
But now I sit confused this fall
Because for the last few years, I haven't thawed
*all danced
Feeling small and alone
Shivering and cold
Like my dick when I get out
Out of the swimming poo-ooool
jack me
suck me
jack me if you can suck me
give it to me good
crunch my crispy penis
give me pleasure
I'm gonna shoot a huge load
all over you
your face
your ass and balls
can't stop cumming
shooting ropes
you belong to me now
I make you cream up my turds every day
you fill me up like a buick
I'm leaking fluids
let's mash dicks
stretch you out
you can't control your bowels
shitting your pants
doodooing
crapping
turding
logging
I cover all of your turds with hot steamy jizz
steamy creamy turds garnished in cum
-a poem I wrote. you could turn it into a song.
problem with threads like these is if you write anything good you don't want to post it to LULZ
Drag me to the back
Where I dont belong
Leave me in the cold
Tell me to do no wrong
this is probably already a song
Walkin up dat sidewalk
Smiling at the seagulls
What a life it is
feeling like im Smeagul